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Five Sentence Fiction: Breakfast

Breakfast for the Bumblebee

Breakfast for the Bumblebee

The morning’s brilliant sunshine belied the cool air, but the bumblebee, sluggish at breakfast on the spent seed head, foretold the change to come. The season had been awaiting the moment and the moment was here, and even as the day warmed and the bees efficiently bumbled on their way, grand and beautiful clouds appeared on the horizon, slowly, quietly parading across the sky, their size and numbers more dense each hour until by afternoon the blue overhead was hung with dreamy cotton and the voice of the wind whispered high in the treetops of what was to come. The day grew darker and more quiet until by early evening all was so still and dim that when the first few whispering patters of rain began their sound was clear, though unintelligible, as if speaking a language, like that of the trees, not of this place.

The rain fell quietly all night, lovingly soaking the hardened earth of late summer until, sated, it slept. As the next morning dawned the rain slowed and stopped, the clouds parted and cleared in a reverse of their arrival the day before, leaving the sun to shine brilliantly in the blue dome of morning, but the heat was gone from the earth, once again, for another season.

Before the Change

Before the Change

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Five Sentence Fiction: Breakfast



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3 responses

  1. Archana Kapoor

    That’a a great take 🙂

    August 29, 2015 at 3:06 pm

  2. Nice take on the prompt

    August 27, 2015 at 5:20 am

    • Thanks! It wasn’t quite “about” breakfast, but I’d taken the photo of the bee earlier and named it “breakfast for the bumblebee” and the piece started writing itself, so I used it, wonderful to be able have a place to share them.

      August 27, 2015 at 6:27 am

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